Showing posts with label 2013 book release. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2013 book release. Show all posts

Friday, July 31, 2015

Book Review: Losing Hope by Colleen Hoover

Title: Losing Hope
Author: Colleen Hoover
Kindle, 321 pages
Published: July 8th, 2013
Publisher: Atria Books
Genre: YA - Contemporary Romance
Source: via Netgalley



In the follow-up to Colleen Hoover’s #1 New York Times bestseller Hopeless, the charming and irresistible Dean Holder tells the passionate story that has melted thousands of hearts.

In Hopeless, Sky left no secret unearthed, no feeling unshared, and no memory forgotten, but Holder’s past remained a mystery.

Still haunted by the little girl he let walk away, Holder has spent his entire life searching for her in an attempt to finally rid himself of the crushing guilt he has felt for years. But he could not have anticipated that the moment they reconnect, even greater remorse would overwhelm him…

Sometimes in life, if we wish to move forward, we must first dig deep into our past and make amends. In Losing Hope, bestselling author Colleen Hoover reveals what was going on inside Holder’s head during all those hopeless moments—and whether he can gain the peace he desperately needs.
Purchase at: Amazon | B&N | TBD | Kobo 

  I'm going with the Goodreads rating system with this one because it was fucking hard to rate it. 2 stars on Goodreads means "it was okay," and that it was. I'm not particularly happy nor sad with this one, but I guess I didn't like it more than I liked it.

  I was really scared to read Losing Hope because I didn't like Hopeless that much, but I decided to read it because most people preferred this book to the first one. After reading this book, I found that I am the opposite. I found Hopeless better than Losing Hope because at least that book held my attention and made me feel things.

  I felt really detached to Losing Hope. I couldn't connect with Holder and I felt like there were too many narratives instead of scenes and conversation. My mind was screaming "You should be feeling hurt and sad and mad in these scenes, damn it!" but my heart didn't feel a single thing. I don't why - maybe it's me, maybe it's the book, but it just didn't work out for me.

  I found myself skimming the pages instead of drinking it all in like I should have. The only things that I could fully read were Holder's letter to Les, the conversations, and the ending. Don't get me wrong, the writing and word-choice is still amazing. In fact, the ending was so beautifully written that I loved it so much.

  Colleen Hoover is a favorite author of mine, but I just have to admit that Losing Hope and Hopeless are not for me. I don't even know why I don't like this book. *sobs* 

2.5 stars. Ah, it's okay. 



Sunday, January 12, 2014

Review by Hillary | 3:59 by Gretchen McNeil


Title: 3:59 
Author: Gretchen McNeil
Pages: 359
Publishing Company: Balzer & Bray 
Genre: YA—Paranormal/Fantasy/Science Fiction  
Released: September 17th 2013


Josie Byrne's life is spiraling out of control. Her parents are divorcing, her boyfriend Nick has grown distant, and her physics teacher has it in for her. When she's betrayed by the two people she trusts most, Josie thinks things can't get worse.

Until she starts having dreams about a girl named Jo. Every night at the same time—3:59 a.m.

Jo's life is everything Josie wants: she's popular, her parents are happily married, and Nick adores her. It all seems real, but they're just dreams, right? Josie thinks so, until she wakes one night to a shadowy image of herself in the bedroom mirror – Jo.

Josie and Jo realize that they are doppelgängers living in parallel universes that overlap every twelve hours at exactly 3:59. Fascinated by Jo's perfect world, Josie jumps at the chance to jump through the portal and switch places for a day.

But Jo’s world is far from perfect. Not only is Nick not Jo's boyfriend, he hates her. Jo's mom is missing, possibly insane. And at night, shadowy creatures feed on human flesh.

By the end of the day, Josie is desperate to return to her own life. But there’s a problem: Jo has sealed the portal, trapping Josie in this dangerous world. Can she figure out a way home before it’s too late?

From master of suspense Gretchen McNeil comes a riveting and deliciously eerie story about the lives we wish we had – and how they just might kill you.

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The first time I ever heard of Gretchen McNeil it was around the end of 2012. That also happened to be the year that I really started getting into YA books. I hadn’t heard about Gretchen prior to that year, but once I did it felt like all bloggers and readers were raving about her books. I felt left out at the time, but I also wasn’t sure if I wanted to let go of the small amount of supernatural, paranormal, and dystopia I’d begun to read then. I wasn’t sure just how ready I was to move on and embrace a new genre. It so happens that a year later would be the time to read my first Gretchen McNeil book.

3:59 started out really contemporary-ish. We start out with main character Josie Byrne living her very normal teenage life in high school with what seems like the perfect friends and boyfriend. Actually Josie only has two friends, Madison and Penelope. Josie’s boyfriend’s is Nick and I was confused at the start because everything seemed to be going fine. That is until Josie goes to Madison’s house to talk with her about everything that’s not going right in her life and to get advice. That’s when she finds out that Madison and Nick have been betraying her behind her back because they’ve been seeing each other for a while. Josie is so broken hearted and I felt so much sympathy for her. I didn’t think it was fair that her best friend and boyfriend would pull a move like that on her, especially when Josie’s going through personal problems at home with her parents. I was proud when Josie tried to move on from that episode with her head held high and start things over as a single person. Although even then it was easy to tell just how much Josie was not over Nick and how much she missed him. For a while I really hoped Josie would really get over him and just think about how it felt to be single and try to enjoy life. Until things took a surprising turn that I was half expecting and at the same time not sure of how things would turn out.

The moment Jo got into the picture I knew things would take a drastic turn in Josie’s life. It was just inevitable that nothing would happen at all. I wasn’t sure what Jo was exactly, if she was Josie’s doppelgänger or just the same person but in another dimension. As soon as Josie asked the same questions I ended up finding out exactly who Jo was. At the same time I told myself that it was sort of like twins separated at birth because I knew my head was trying to wrap around itself on the concept of alternate universes. When Josie finally made the decision to go through the portal and finally meet Jo in person, I knew things would become much bigger than they’d started out and they did.

The pacing started out a teensy bit slow at the beginning, but things started speeding up much more as soon as Josie goes through that portal. I got to meet new characters (actually their not really that new, just the same people with different personalities) and it was pretty trippy for a while. I felt like I had to re-meet characters that I’d gotten to know before and start all over again. It was certainly nice to get to know Nick all over again though. Nick the doppelgänger was definitely swoon worthy, a lot more than his counterpart from the other side. I couldn’t help but notice the same things that Josie did while living in Jo’s world and I understood why that Nick would be more desirable than the one she’d gone out with before. I know for certain that I ended up swooning over that Nick than the one I’d gotten to know at the start. There were also creatures of the night involved in the story that were pretty creepy. Especially while reading at night, the shadows the trees make by my window creeped me out for a few days. I felt like those monsters came out of the story only to haunt me too.

3:59 by Gretchen McNeil was an amazing story. I know for certain that I’ve never read anything quite like it before. Throughout the story I managed to care about a few of her characters, the first being Josie Byrne who showed signs of growth within the actions and decisions she had to make. Doppelgänger Nick and both Penelope’s were the type of people I wouldn’t mind knowing in real life because they were the type of friends that supported Josie through thick and thin. After reading 3:59 I know that I have to read some of Gretchen’s other works and I really look forward to doing that soon. I hope others out there that haven’t read any of Gretchen McNeil’s books do so ASAP! I totally recommend for everyone to read 3:59! I’m sure you won’t regret it.



 4.5 STARS - Totally Awesome! I loved it, would read again.


Sunday, December 15, 2013

Review by Hillary: The Fiery Heart (Bloodlines #4) by Richelle Mead


Title: The Fiery Heart (Bloodlines #4)
Author: Richelle Mead
Publishing Company: Razorbill
Genre: YA—Paranormal Romance
Pages: 420
Released: November 19th 2013



Sydney Sage is an Alchemist, one of a group of humans who dabble in magic and serve to bridge the worlds of humans and vampires. They protect vampire secrets - and human lives.

In The Indigo Spell, Sydney was torn between the Alchemist way of life and what her heart and gut were telling her to do. And in one breathtaking moment that Richelle Mead fans will never forget, she made a decision that shocked even her. . . .

But the struggle isn't over for Sydney. As she navigates the aftermath of her life-changing decision, she still finds herself pulled in too many directions at once. Her sister Zoe has arrived, and while Sydney longs to grow closer to her, there's still so much she must keep secret. Working with Marcus has changed the way she views the Alchemists, and Sydney must tread a careful path as she harnesses her profound magical ability to undermine the way of life she was raised to defend. Consumed by passion and vengeance, Sydney struggles to keep her secret life under wraps as the threat of exposure — and re-education — looms larger than ever.

Pulses will race throughout this smoldering fourth installment in the New York Times bestselling Bloodlines series, where no secret is safe.



Usually after I read a Richelle Mead book I feel so empty. You may be asking why and here’s the reason: her books just get to me so much it’s not even funny. Ever since I first stumbled upon her books back in high school (thanks to some friends) I haven’t been able to turn back and I wouldn’t want to either. Something about the way Richelle writes just engrosses me so much I get absorbed into the story and books wholeheartedly. I love her books and I love how she writes. Not only is Richelle a great writer, but she’s also been a great teacher to me. I learn more and more great writing techniques each time I finish one of her books. The Fiery Heart was definitely no exception.

I remember after reading The indigo Spell that I felt so content with the way things ended in that book (well some of the things) that it felt like I could release a breath I’d been holding in the whole time. The first three books in the series definitely left things up in the air because you don’t really know what’s going to happen. There was always questions like, is Sydney really going to follow her heart and finally be with Adrian? Is Sydney really going to be able to leave the Alchemists that she’s known her whole life? Will Sydney be able to face the consequences if the Alchemists ever find out? That last question plays a major part in The Fiery Heart and I think it only got worse because Zoe, Sydney’s younger sister, was there the whole time watching everything and anything Sydney did. I was constantly on the edge of my seat worried about what would happen if Zoe found out what Sydney was really up to (I was almost tempted to pull my hair out or screaming in frustration). We end up finding out exactly what Zoe does in the fourth installment and I couldn’t have been more caught off guard by her actions than I was.

In The Fiery Heart we return to where we last left off. Sydney finally accepted her feelings for Adrian and has let herself be with him, Adrian returns Sydney’s feelings wholeheartedly and embraces every little chance they can be together (without getting caught), Angeline broke up with Eddie because she was attracted to Trey but Trey is having a hard time knowing if he wants to be with her or not since he’s conflicted over his feelings about returning to the Warriors of Light, Jill and Angeline both feign interest in the new guardian named Neil, Eddie is more focused on doing what he has to and watching out for his friends, and Zoe watches out for Sydney like a hawk the entire book which always exasperated me (okay, maybe more than exasperate). Everyone is back and while things may have felt like a mess in the third book, things started resolving and made everything more manageable. Sydney finally decides on two things, but one of those things would totally help out with the anti-Alchemists (or the “merry men” as Adrian calls them).
The fourth installment of the Bloodlines series was definitely and utterly the best yet. I was always at the edge of my seat, waiting to see what happened next. It was like riding through a maze. Sometimes you would keep going straight and all of a sudden a sharp turn would be thrown you’re way, making you turn left or right depending on what surprise was thrown in the first place. The new and old characters manage to make you feel as though their real. Sometimes I’m seriously absorbed in these books that I feel like if I go to Palm Springs I might be able to find and meet them in person. That would be so awesome! And the plot lines definitely increase in this fourth book.

The Fiery Heart by Richelle Mead was the best yet. I’m definitely excited for Silver Shadows to come out next year. I absolutely cannot wait to get my hands on that book! I wish I could go into the future just to bring a copy back with me into the present so I could read the book ahead of time. That’s how desperate I am to read the fifth installment. I’m sure other fans out there of this series feel the same way and I feel so much sympathy for everyone. I can definitely relate to how everyone is feeling. Richelle Mead definitely delivered in this book, cleverly and expertly. I like that things feel so subtle at times then BAM! A surprise comes out of nowhere. If you’re asking what I’m talking about you’re going to have to go get a copy of this book ASAP because I’m keeping my mouth shut, though it’s a hard fight. I feel like yelling what happens at the top of my lungs but unlike me, I’m sure others prefer to be surprised. The writing was immaculate like always and all of the characters voices resonated through my mind the way that their supposed to (thankfully). The character growth was also very impressive and I cannot wait to see how much they grow in book five and six. I’m pretty sure the growth will be even more impressive then. I hope all of you who have or haven’t started this series run out to get these books and read them because if not you’re definitely missing out. This is a one-of-a-kind story you do not want to miss and I hope I’ve convinced all of you enough to believe me. I hope you’re emotions become topsy-turvy as mine did in each book and in The Fiery Heart and I cannot wait to find out what other fans of the series are saying about the story. I’ll definitely be looking out for more reviews on this book.


*Quotes That Made Me Crack Up*

“’They’d send us off to our mentors and lock us away. No boys. No temptation. Lose your virginity, girl, and you lose half you magic…’ She finally paused to catch her breath and drink more tea. I made a point of studying her teacup because I knew if I looked at Adrian, I was going to start laughing.” (pg. 60)

“She strode off without another word or glance. All three of the guys stared after her, making no attempt to hide their lascivious looks. Sydney and I had experienced many things in our relationship, but this was the first time I’d ever felt such consuming hostility toward other guys. I wanted to punch them all.” (pg. 261)


Totally EPIC! One of the best books I have read. A MUST read!!


Special Guest: Book Reviewer:
Hillary
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Hillary currently lives in Fontana, California and sometimes wishes she lived in a rainier place. When out of her world of fiction and music, college homework becomes part of her focus and so does worrying about exams. She still manages to find plenty of time to read YA books and hopes to have a room full of books like some authors are fortunate to have. Hillary is currently working toward earning a degree in English, but in the meantime she is content to help a very kind book blogger known as Beckie from Bittersweet Enchantment. Hillary hopes to become a well-known author one day, but currently writes small stories whenever she has time.


Thank you Hillary for your spectacular review! :) 



Thursday, December 12, 2013

Blog Tour: Crystal Fire by Jordan Dane ( @HarlequinTeen ) | Book Promo + Excerpt + Giveaway! Win 1 of 10 Finished copies of Crystal Fire

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Hello and welcome to the Crystal Fire by Jordan Dane book blog tour hosted by YA Bound ToursToday is my stop on the tour and I have the pleasure of sharing with you all a book spotlight as well as really wonderful giveaway. Be sure to check out the giveaway at the end of this post. You'll have a chance to win 1 of 10 finished print copies of Crystal Fire.




Crystal Fire (The Hunted #2)
by Jordan Dane 
Release Date: 11/26/13 by Harlequin Teen
Paperback (and ebook)336 pages
Genre: YA - Urban Fantasy, Romance



Because of what you are, the Believers will hunt you down.

A storm is brewing on the streets of LA, one that has intensified since a tragic and deadly confrontation claimed an innocent life.

While Gabriel Stewart trains his army of teen psychics to stop Alexander Reese--the obsessed leader of the Believers--the fanatical church becomes more bent on the annihilation of all Indigo and Crystal children. They're silencing the voices of the telepathic hive, one soul at a time, with frightening experiments cruelly executed on vulnerable minds.

When the Believers torture a mysterious homeless boy, Oliver Blue, they brainwash him into betraying his own. The boy becomes a deadly pawn to take Gabriel down. As the fires of chaos burn around him, Gabe is running out of time. He'll need to confront his past--and the man who made him--before the hope of peace for the future is silenced forever.
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Fun Factoid about the new character of Caila Ferrie: She is a reader/author who won a contest of  mine and got named as a character in Crystal Fire when she shared her thoughts on what psychic  power she wanted to have. Many of the character’s bizarre traits were things the real Caila shared  with me, like her Disney tunes and Cheez Whiz addictions. The real Caila is an amazing person and  she made for a fun Indigo.

Crystal Fire by Jordan Dane – Excerpt
West Hollywood
10:20 p.m.

A sane person wouldn’t think about going inside—alone—but Caila Ferrie didn’t have a  choice. She wasn’t a stranger to darkness. She’d spent much of her life sinking into it,  forced into the shelter and anonymity of shadows by her own choosing. That realization  hit her as she stared at a deserted old warehouse from a murky alley across the street,  believing she’d be better off inside than where she was. Brick walls were scrawled with  veins of graffiti and glutted by neglect. Light from the street reflected off the jagged glass of  busted windows and made the pitch-black broken parts look as if the building had eyes.

 It was the third location she’d tried tonight, her last shot at finding Oliver Blue. She shut her eyes and took a deep breath. Please let this be it, she prayed. If she came up empty, she  had nowhere else to go. Before she cut across the street, she looked over her shoulder and  listened hard. She’d been careful and thought no one followed her, but it never hurt to be  sure. Caila stuck to the shadows, even if it meant she had to take the long way around to  cross the street. She took the precaution as much for Oliver as she did for her. 

The guy was a loner. That’s why few people knew anything about him. She’d met him  only once through her friend Zack, who’d said that if anything bad happened, Oliver would be a guy she could trust. Zack never said why he had such faith in him, but he’d been adamant. 

Because she trusted her friend, Caila had listened when he told her where to look for the  guy, but the one time she’d met Oliver, he put her on edge. He didn’t say much and barely  made eye contact. He looked irritated that Zack had brought her. After her friend pulled him  aside to explain, Oliver nudged his chin and mumbled the only words he’d directed at her.  “Zack’s a good guy to watch your back. Hope you do the same for him.” Oliver left without saying  another word. At the time she never thought she’d see him again. 

If she wasn’t desperate, she wouldn’t have come. 

It took Caila time to check every door and the loading bay for a way into the abandoned  building. Everything on street level was locked tight. She almost gave up until she spotted  a fire escape that led to the upper floors and the rooftop. Climbing those steps would make  her a target for anyone watching the warehouse. If she found a way in, she wouldn’t have  much of an escape if she needed one, and metal stairs made noise. She debated her  options, but the fact was that she didn’t have any. She hadn’t risked searching for Oliver to  give up now.

Caila climbed the rusted steps and didn’t look down. She kept her hands on the filthy  railing, even in the spots riddled with gross chewing gum. With a bird’s-eye view, she took  comfort that she hadn’t been followed and felt safe enough to crouch on a step in the dark.  She reached into her jacket pocket and pulled out her last can of Cheez Whiz and squirted  it in her mouth. She had to take a hit to keep her stomach from growling. After she emptied  the can, she left it on the fire escape and got moving.

Zack had always kept her supplied with the stuff, that and spray whipped cream. Cheez  Whiz reminded her of him. She’d found Zack when she’d needed someone to look after  her, but memories of him were blasted out of her skull by an absurd habit she had almost  no control over. Whenever she got nervous, random Disney songs ear-wormed her. An  outburst from the French chef in The Little Mermaid erupted in her head like a brain itch.

Not now!

Whoever had control of the Disney MP3 in her brain took weird pleasure in torturing her with a music doodle when she least expected it. The habit had come from a distant  memory, something she should have remembered as important, but couldn’t quite recall.  It usually signaled something bad, but not always. After she found a metal door with a broken lock on the second level, she stepped into the crushing silence of the abandoned warehouse—and even the French chef quit singing. A tingle raced across her skin like the chilling touch of a cold hand. 

Caila wasn’t alone. Someone watched her. Her gift of second sight had sent her a warning, a rippling sensation that had started in her chest and raced down her arms. Being psychic, she relied on her instincts for everything. The impulse to run grew stronger, but she fought the push. Her promise to Zack made her stay.


All about book #1, Indigo Awakening

Title: Indigo Awakening
Author: Jordan Dane
Number of Pages: 304
Published: December 18th 2012 by Harlequin Teen
Source:  Kindle ARC - Harlequin Teen
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Reading Level: Young Adult


Because of what you are, the Believers will hunt you down.

Voices told Lucas Darby to run. Voices no one else can hear. He’s warned his sister not to look for him, but Rayne refuses to let her troubled brother vanish on the streets of LA. In her desperate search, she meets Gabriel Stewart, a runaway with mysterious powers and far too many secrets. Rayne can’t explain her crazy need to trust the strange yet compelling boy—to touch him—to protect him even though he scares her.

A fanatical church secretly hunts psychic kids—gifted “Indigo” teens feared to be the next evolution of mankind—for reasons only “the Believers” know. Now Rayne’s only hope is Gabe, who is haunted by an awakening power—a force darker than either of them imagine—that could doom them all.
Come check out my review for Indigo Awakening - HERE


About The Author: Jordan Dane

Find Jordan Dane @

Bestselling, critically-acclaimed author Jordan Dane’s gritty romantic thrillers are ripped from the headlines with vivid settings, intrigue, and dark humor. Publishers Weekly compared her intense novels to Lisa Jackson, Lisa Gardner, and Tami Hoag, naming her debut novel NO ONE HEARD HER SCREAM as Best Books of 2008. She also pens young-adult novels for Harlequin Teen. Formerly an energy sales manager, she now writes full time. Jordan and her husband share their Texas residence with two cats of highborn lineage and two lucky rescue dogs. 


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Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Blog Tour: Chasing the Star Garden by Melanie Karsak | Excerpt + Guest Post + Giveaway! Win a Kindle Fire HDX & More!

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Chasing the Star Garden 
(The Airship Racing Chronicles #1)
by Melanie Karsak
Genre: Alternative History/Gaslamp-Steampunk
Publisher: Clockpunk Press
Date of Publication: December 4th, 2013
ISBN: 978-0615878775
ISBN-10: 0615878776
Number of pages: 325
Word Count:  70,000
Cover Artist: Damonza




An opium-addicted beauty.An infamous poet living in self-imposed exile.An ancient treasure about to fall into the wrong hands.

Melanie Karsak's Chasing the Star Garden takes readers on a thrilling adventure from the gritty opium dens of gaslamp London to the gem-colored waters of the ancient world. Lily Stargazer, a loveable but reckless airship racer with a famous lover and shattered past, reluctantly plunges into a centuries-old mystery in a romantic adventure best described as Dan Brown meets Mary Shelley.

It all begins on one of the worst days of Lily’s life. She just lost the London leg of the 1823 Airship Grand Prix. To top it off, a harlequin fleeing from constables shoved a kaleidoscope down her pants, told her to fly to Venice, then threw himself from her airship tower. What’s a girl to do? For Lily, the answer is easy: drink absinthe and smoke opium. 

Lily’s lover, Lord Byron, encourages her to make the trip to Venice. Lily soon finds herself at the heart of an ancient mystery which has her running from her past and chasing true love and the stars along the way.

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Chasing the Star GardenChapter 1

I was going to lose-again. I gripped the brass handles on the wheel and turned the airship sharply port. The tiller vibrated in protest making the wheel shake and my wrist bones ache. Bracing my knees against the spokes, I tore off my brown leather gloves to get a better feel. The metal handgrips were smooth and cold. My fingers tingled from the chill. 

“Easy,” I whispered to the Stargazer. I looked up from my position at the wheelstand, past the ropes, burner basket, and balloon, toward the clouds. They were drifting slowly left in a periwinkle blue sky. There’d be an updraft as we passed over the green-brown waters of the canal near Buckingham House. I locked the wheel and jumped from the wheelstand onto the deck of the gondola and looked over the rail. The canal waters were a hundred feet away. I ran back to the wheel and steadied the ship. If I caught the updraft, it would propel me up and forward and give me an edge. 

“Cutter caught it, Lily,” Jessup yelled down from the burner basket below the balloon opening. “Up he goes,” he added, looking out through his spyglass. The gold polish on the spyglass reflected the fire from the burner. 
“Dammit!” I snapped down my binocular lense. I saw Hank Cutter’s red-and-white striped balloon rise upward. At the top, he pitched forward with great momentum, catching a horizontal wind. I could just make out Cutter at the wheel. His blond hair blew wildly around him. He turned and waved to me. Wanker.

I was not as lucky. Just as the bow of the Stargazer reached the water, a stray wind came in and blew us leeward. The balloon jiggled violently in the turbulent air. I missed the air pocket altogether.

“No! No, no, no!” I cursed and steadied the ship. I had chased Cutter from Edinburgh across the Scottish and English countryside. He had been off his game all day. I’d had him by half a mile the entire race. With the bottom feeders lingering somewhere in the distance behind us, I’d thought the London leg of the 1823 Airship Grand Prix would be mine. That was until St. Albans, where Cutter caught a random breeze that pushed him slightly in front of me. Cutter had a knack for catching favorable winds; it was not a talent I shared.

“We’re coming up on Westminster,” Jessup yelled down from the basket. “Lily, drop altitude. Cutter is too high. Come in low and fast, and you might overtake him.”

The airship towers sat at the pier near the Palace of Westminster along the Thames. A carnival atmosphere had overtaken the city as it always does on race day. Colorful tents were set up everywhere. Vendors hawked their wares to excited Londoners and international visitors. I could hear the merchants barking from their tents even from this far above. I fancied I could smell roasted peanuts in the wind.

I jumped down from the wheelstand, ran across the deck, and pulled the valve cord, opening the flap at the top of the balloon. Hot air released with a hiss. I kept one eye on the balloon and another eye on Tinkers’ Tower. At this time of day, the heat coming off of the Palace of Westminster and Tinkers’ Tower would give us a bump. I looked up. Cutter had started preparing his descent. It would be close.

I ran back to the wheel. 

“Angus, I need more speed,” I yelled down to the gear galley, rapping on the wooden hatch that led to the rods, belts, and propeller parts below. 

Angus slapped open the hatch and stuck out his bald head. His face was covered in grease, and his blue-lense monocle glimmered in the sunlight. He looked up at the clouds and back at me. 

“Let’s giddyup,” I called to him.

“You trying the Tower sling?” he yelled back.

“You got it.”

He laughed wildly. “That’s my lassie,” he yelled and dropped back down, pulling the wood hatch closed with a clap. I heard the gears grind, and the propeller, which had been turning nice and steady, began to hum loudly. The ship pitched forward. Within moments, we were coming up on Tinkers’ Tower. The airship towers were just a stone’s throw away.

I aimed the ship directly toward Tinkers’ Tower. Just as the bowsprit neared the clock, I yanked the wheel. The warm air caught us. 

“Whoa!” Jessup yelled as the balloon moved within arm’s length of the tower. 

The sound of “Ohhs!” echoed from the crowd below.

A mix of warm air and propulsion gave us some go, and seconds later we were slingshotting around Tinkers’ Tower toward the airship platforms. Gliding in on warm air and momentum, we flew fast and low. 
Cutter had kept it high, but now he was dropping like a stone toward his own tower. Damned American. I didn’t blame him; I would have used the same move. His balloon was releasing so much air that I wondered if he would be able to slow down in time, not that I would have minded seeing him smash to the ground in a million pieces.
“It’s going to be close,” Jessup yelled as he adjusted the heat pan.

I guided the helm. The Stargazer was temperamental, but we understood one another. A shake of the wheel warned me I was pushing too hard. “Almost there,” I whispered to the ship.

The Grand Prix Marshalls were standing on the platform. Cutter and I had the end towers. I was going to make it.
“Cut propulsion,” I yelled toward the gear galley. On the floor near the wheelstand, a rope led to a bell in the galley. I rang it twice. The propeller switched off.

A soft, sweet wind blew in from the port side. It ruffled my hair around my shoulders. I closed my eyes and turned the wheel slightly starboard, guiding the ship in. Moments later, I heard a jubilant cheer erupt from the American side and an explosion from the firework cannon signaling the winner had been declared. My eyes popped open. I tore off my goggles and looked starboard. Cutter’s balloon was docked. I threw the goggles onto the deck and set my forehead against the wheel.

The Stargazer settled into her dock. Jessup set the balloon on hover and, grabbing a rope, swung down to the deck. He then threw the lead lines and anchors onto the platform. The beautifully dressed crowd, gentlemen in suits and top hats and fancy ladies in a rainbow of satin gowns carrying parasols, rushed toward the American end of the platform to congratulate the winner. 

I was, once again, a national disgrace. Lily the loser. Lily second place. Perhaps I would never be anything more than a ferrywoman, a cheap air jockey.

“Good job, Lily. Second place!” Jessup said joining me. He patted me on the shoulder.
I sighed deeply and unbuttoned my vest. The tension had me sweating; I could feel it dripping down from my neck, between my breasts, into my corset. 

“You did great,” I told Jessup. “Sorry I let you down.”

“Ah, Lily,” he sighed.

Angus emerged from below wiping sweat from his head with a greasy rag. He pulled off his monocle. He frowned toward the American side. “Well, we beat the French,” he said with a shrug and kissed me on the cheek, smearing grease on me.

 “Good job, Angus. Thank you,” I said, taking him by the chin and giving him a little shake as I wrinkled my nose and smiled at him. 

Angus laughed and dropped his arm around Jessup’s shoulders. They grinned happily at one another.

“You stink, brother,” Jessup told him.

“It’s a wee bit toasty down there. Besides, I pedaled this ship across the entire fucking country while you were up here looking at the birds. That, my friend, is the smell of success.”

I laughed.

“You pedaled the ship?” Jessup asked mockingly. “Like Lil and I were just up here playing cards? If I didn’t keep the balloon aloft, your ass would be kissing the ground.”

“Now wait a minute. Are you saying your job is more important that mine?” Angus retorted.
I could see where this was going. “Gents.”

“More important? Now why would I say that? Just because I’m the one . . .” Jessup started and then his mouth ran.

“Gents.”

“ . . . and another thing . . .” Jessup went on.

“Gentlemen! Our audience awaits,” I said cutting them both off, motioning to the well-shod crowd who waited for us on the loading platform outside the Stargazer. 

I grinned at my crew. “Come on. Let’s go.”

I patted the rail of the Stargazer. “Thanks,” I whispered to her, and we exited onto the platform.

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“Black Friday” Shopping, 1823
Lily Stargazer’s Holiday Shopping List
By Melanie Karsak

Thanks to Beckie for allowing me to stop by Bittersweet Enchantment today to talk about my new steampunk novel, Chasing the Star Garden. The novel is the first in a new series which chronicles the life of airship (think hot air balloon) racer Lily Stargazer. Moments after Lily loses the London leg of the 1823 Airship Grand Prix, a harlequin thrusts a kaleidoscope down her pants. He tells her to fly to Venice before throwing himself off her airship tower. Lily’s lover and co-opium eater, Lord Byron, encourages her to make the trip. Lily soon finds herself thrust (reluctantly) on an adventure that has her chasing the stars and true love. 
For my guest blog today, I wanted to find a way to introduce you to the characters in my novel. Like many of you, I am in the belly of the best in terms of holiday shopping. What defines the perfect gift? Oh gosh, shopping is a nightmare for me. This gave me an idea. Sometimes gifts say a lot about their recipients, right? 
For my guest blog today, I give you Lily Stargazer’s Holiday Shopping List! Get to know that characters of Chasing the Star Garden, a steampunk novel set in an alternative 1823, as we shop with Lily Stargazer!

Shopping for George Gordon, Lord Byron

Lord Byron is not the kind of man for whom you buy a gift. He is a man who thrives on the thrill of experience. While he loves luxury items, he generally enjoys, consumes, then moves on. Lily looked at fine silk scarves, a pocket watch, a bottle of cologne, and even a new writing instrument, but she realized that Byron wouldn’t find that much value in these things. Instead, Lily hit up all her contacts until she procured a nice bottle of absinthe. Then, hopping the first airship transport out of London, she headed abroad to meet her lover for a hot weekend!

Shopping for Sal

Salvatore Colonna is one of Lily’s closest friends and another of her more regular lovers. Salvatore is a tinker by trade. He keeps a stall in the Hungerford Market where he creates inventions ahead of their time. Lily and Sal have a unique relationship. Lily appreciates Sal’s intellect and feels like he is a true companion. Though he is twice her age, she has always felt a special spark with him. This year, she wanted to give him something unique. While in Malta, she uncovered an antique astrolabe, a mechanism used for determining latitude and longitude based on the position of the planets. She knows this is one device Sal is sure to love. 

Shopping for Celeste

In Chasing the Star Garden, Lily will travel from London to Venice. In Venice, she will meet a courtesan by the name of Celeste. Celeste’s role in the novel is an important one, so important that I can’t tell you too many details, but Celeste is looking for something and she needs Lily’s help. Lily knows that Celeste, someone who is a professional in the art of love, would truly appreciate the words of a master. For her, she has selected a collection of poems by Sappho, including the Hymn to Aphrodite.

Shopping for Angus and Jessup
Comfortable pants for Angus


A warm coat for Jessup


Last, Lily needs to buy gifts for her crew members, Angus and Jessup. The two men are like brothers to her, so of course she will buy them something practical: clothes! When we think of steampunk clothing, we often focus on steampunk women, but there are some great outfits out there for steampunk men as well. Lily wants to make sure Jessup stays warm as he manages the balloon basket and that Angus is comfortable as he works the gear galley of their airship, the Stargazer. Lily headed into London and returned with these outfits for her adopted brothers!

Just like us, after a long day of shopping, Lily would have to look for a little R&R. Let’s leave her to her devices! I hope you enjoyed taking a shopping trip with Lily. Thanks again to Beckie for having me drop in to talk about Chasing the Star Garden! Happy Holidays, everyone! Cheers!



About The Author: Melanie Karsak

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Melanie Karsak grew up in rural northwestern Pennsylvania where there was an abysmal lack of entertainment, so she turned to reading and hiking. Apparently, rambling around the woods with a head full of fantasy worlds and characters will inspire you to become an author. Be warned. Melanie wrote her first novel, a gripping piece about a 1920s stage actress, when she was 12. A steampunk connoisseur, white elephant collector, and caffeine junkie, the author now resides in Florida with her husband and two children. Melanie is an Instructor of English at Eastern Florida State College. 


Tour Wide Giveaway

1) Grand prize is a Kindle Fire HDX Table and an autographed copy of Chasing the Star Garden

2) Second place, an autographed copy of Chasing the Star Garden (5 winners)

3) Third place, 20 ebook copies of Chasing the Star Garden (20 winners)


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